Talk:Jallianwalla Bagh massacre
i do see this article has a high viewing count compared to Bagat Singh article with 250 refs. V seems to be doing O.K.Allenwalla 23:49, 27 October 2007 (EDT)
Better verbiage in first sentence
The first sentence says:
- Jallianwala Bagh Massacre, involved the killing of hundreds of unarmed, defenceless Indians by a senior British military officer
Can we please edit that to something a little clearer? Like "…on the orders of…" or something?
IFaqeer ji, I have made a small change to add the name of Dyer in the first sentence. I hope this makes it a bit clearer.