Talk:Chaudhary Lakhi Singh

I like many readers will come upon this page and read the article to learn of the man's deeds.

In the following sentence, as a stranger not familiar with this man, i am unclear who is being credited or criticized. I can make assuptions, but i would rather be certain.

Chaudhary Lakhi Singh was close to Sant Prem Singh. He preached against social evils and unique features of Lobana culture.

In——He preached against social evils and unique features of Lobana culture. I do not know which man Chaudhary Lakhi Singh or Sant Prem Singh is the he.

It is also is not clear if Lobana culture has unique evils or is being praised as having unique positive features.

1. Chaudhary Lakhi Singh was an associate of Sant Prem Singh. He, like the Sant, preached often and vigorously against the growing social evils of the times. As a proud Labana he often spoke on the many unique features of his culture.

2. Chaudhary Lakhi Singh was close to Sant Prem Singh who preached often and vigorously against the growing social evils of the times. As a proud Labana he often spoke on the many unique features of his culture. Allenwalla 20:50, 15 November 2007 (MST) which is better 1. or 2.