User talk:Mutia/TRUTH

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Thanks to Hari Singh ji...

.... for the Following Feed Back & guidance on this page: -

writing does not comply with our guidelines

Sir, I will review it in the light of This observation.

There is no clear Message in the article

Sir, entire Satgurbani has only one Message, ie Solution to the universal one issue "How to Become a Khalsa ( Truthfull Human Being ) ?". So does this Page. This page defines Khalsa, gives his life long committment to TRUTH & finally one line berief of 38 Steps of Japuji Sahib.

Should have been linked to Gurbani or Sikh history.

Sir the page itself is Brief of japuji Sahib in moderen day English/ Management Style presentation.

The article needs to be coherent

Sir, it is just the starting. It will be coherent once duly linked. I will be working on.

The article need to be in the defined format

please see SikhiWiki Help especially the manual of style.

Sir, all points taken with grace & will be comlied with.

--Mutia 11:37, 11 May 2008 (MDT)

PS: To realise the dream of this site becoming a True Sikh. website it is Strongly recommended that SikhiWiki as an organisation formulate a Team of Five Gurmat Scholars as per the commandments of Satgurbani

p.c prvan p.c prDan ... 

....to manage the protocols associated with contributions by the Users. We need 4 more Hari Singh jis as Regulatory Structure of Sikhi. on Wiki platform. Each member of the organisation holding following portfolios & work associated with managing the affairs of the site.

1. Daya 2. Dharam 3. Himmat 4. Leadeship 5. Accountability

As on date all the above functions ssem to having been performed by Hari Singhji --Mutia 11:37, 11 May 2008 (MDT)