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i do see this article has a high viewing count compared to Bagat Singh article with 250 refs. | i do see this article has a high viewing count compared to Bagat Singh article with 250 refs. | ||
V seems to be doing O.K.[[User:Allenwalla|Allenwalla]] 23:49, 27 October 2007 (EDT) | V seems to be doing O.K.[[User:Allenwalla|Allenwalla]] 23:49, 27 October 2007 (EDT) | ||
==Better verbiage in first sentence== | |||
The first sentence says: | |||
:''Jallianwala Bagh Massacre, involved the killing of hundreds of unarmed, defenceless Indians by a senior British military officer'' | |||
Can we please edit that to something a little clearer? Like "…on the orders of…" or something? | |||
—[[User:IFaqeer|iFaqeer]] [[User talk:IFaqeer|(Talk to me!)]] 09:26, 21 February 2022 (UTC) | |||
IFaqeer ji, I have made a small change to add the name of Dyer in the first sentence. I hope this makes it a bit clearer. <br> | |||
*Kind regards, [[user:hari singh|Hari Singh]]<sup>[[User talk:Hari singh|talk]]</sup> 06:02, 6 May 2022 (MDT) | |||
Latest revision as of 06:02, 6 May 2022
i do see this article has a high viewing count compared to Bagat Singh article with 250 refs. V seems to be doing O.K.Allenwalla 23:49, 27 October 2007 (EDT)
Better verbiage in first sentence
The first sentence says:
- Jallianwala Bagh Massacre, involved the killing of hundreds of unarmed, defenceless Indians by a senior British military officer
Can we please edit that to something a little clearer? Like "…on the orders of…" or something?
—iFaqeer (Talk to me!) 09:26, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
IFaqeer ji, I have made a small change to add the name of Dyer in the first sentence. I hope this makes it a bit clearer.
- Kind regards, Hari Singhtalk 06:02, 6 May 2022 (MDT)
