Talk:Jallianwalla Bagh massacre

i do see this article has a high viewing count compared to Bagat Singh article with 250 refs. V seems to be doing O.K.Allenwalla 23:49, 27 October 2007 (EDT)

Better verbiage in first sentence

The first sentence says:

Jallianwala Bagh Massacre, involved the killing of hundreds of unarmed, defenceless Indians by a senior British military officer

Can we please edit that to something a little clearer? Like "…on the orders of…" or something?

—iFaqeer (Talk to me!) 09:26, 21 February 2022 (UTC)